Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis::$environment is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/thesis.php on line 21

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis::$wp_customize is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/thesis.php on line 99

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis::$caching is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/thesis.php on line 100

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis::$wpseo is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/thesis.php on line 101

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$options is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 22

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$base is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 895

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$strings is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 23

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$form is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 24

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$schema is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 25

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$colors is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 30

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$fonts is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 31

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_typography::$phi is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api/typography.php on line 13

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$typography is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 32

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$css is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 33

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis::$api is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/thesis.php on line 75

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis::$wp is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/thesis.php on line 76

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis::$skins is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/thesis.php on line 82

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis::$skin is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/thesis.php on line 87

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_api::$home_seo is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api.php on line 47

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_wp::$terms is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/wp.php on line 117

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_favicon::$tooltip is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 543

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_box::$_dependents is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 86

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_box::$_startup is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 88

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_edit::$edit is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1335

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_content::$custom is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1354

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_content::$read_more is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1355

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_excerpt::$read_more is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1411

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_num_comments::$singular is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1505

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_num_comments::$plural is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1506

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_image::$image_type is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1659

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_thumbnail::$image_type is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1791

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis::$_wp_featured_image_rss is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 323

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_box::$_dependents is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 86

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_box::$_startup is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 88

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_edit::$edit is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1335

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_content::$custom is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1354

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_content::$read_more is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1355

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_excerpt::$read_more is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1411

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_num_comments::$singular is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1505

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_num_comments::$plural is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1506

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_image::$image_type is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1659

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_post_thumbnail::$image_type is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/boxes.php on line 1791

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_wp_nav_menu::$control is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 71

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments_intro::$singular is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 370

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments_intro::$plural is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 371

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments::$_dependents is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 86

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments::$_startup is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 88

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_permalink::$link is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 605

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_reply::$text is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 677

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments::$_dependents is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 86

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments::$_startup is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 88

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_permalink::$link is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 605

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_reply::$text is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 677

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments::$_dependents is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 86

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments::$_startup is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 88

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_permalink::$link is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 605

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_reply::$text is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 677

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments_nav::$previous is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 703

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments_nav::$next is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 704

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments_nav::$previous is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 703

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments_nav::$next is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 704

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_form_title::$leave is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 814

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_form::$_dependents is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 86

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_form::$_startup is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 88

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_form_cancel::$cancel is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 1007

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_form_title::$leave is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 814

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_form::$_dependents is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 86

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_form::$_startup is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/skin_boxes.php on line 88

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comment_form_cancel::$cancel is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 1007

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_previous_posts_link::$previous is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 1154

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_next_posts_link::$next is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 1196

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_classic_r::$grt is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin.php on line 156

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_fonts::$list is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api/fonts.php on line 17

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_fonts::$select is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api/fonts.php on line 100

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_skin_fonts::$list is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/api/fonts.php on line 18

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_skin_fonts::$select is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/skin/api/fonts.php on line 129

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_css_api::$strings is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api/css.php on line 17

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_css_api::$properties is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api/css.php on line 18

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_css_api::$options is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/core/api/css.php on line 19
10 Takeaways from Typography for Lawyers - Part 1 — Legal Writing Editor
≡ Menu

10 Takeaways from Typography for Lawyers – Part 1

(Note: You can access an updated version of this column here).

As I’ve posted, I recently finished reviewing Matthew Butterick’s Typography for Lawyers. Typography for Lawyers runs only 210 pages, and it’s an easy read. The book begins with a Foreword by Bryan Garner, who claims that “[i]f Matthew Butterick didn’t exist, it would be necessary to invent him.” Given that preface, I thought I’d be reading a book written by a Garner disciple, and, to an extent, that turned out to be true. Both Garner and Butterick take their jobs very seriously. Butterick, like Garner, is a fantastic, conversational writer. Like Garner, his writing ability may only be matched by his – shall we say – “self-confidence.” Like Garner’s usage advice, Butterick’s typography advice generally allows for little or no wiggle room. There is right and there is wrong.

But having attended multiple Garner legal-writing seminars over the years, the truth may be that Butterick has influenced Garner as well. For example, it was not until last year that Garner begin recommending in his Advanced Legal Writing & Editing seminar that you should use one space after a period instead of two; indeed, I cannot find Garner raising the one-space-after-a-period issue in the 2004 second edition of The Winning Brief. So Typography for Lawyers definitely breaks a lot of new ground. My next two posts will be dedicated to what I think are the 10 best takeaways from the book. The first five, in no particular order of importance, follow.

Use only one space between sentences. Butterick says that you have no choice when deciding how many spaces should be between sentences (indeed, after any punctuation mark): There should only be one space. He cites multiple typography authorities, including the Chicago Manual of Style, Garner’s Redbook, and the 7th Circuit’s Requirements and Suggestions for Typography in Briefs and Other Papers. True, I’ve pointed out that other writers have taken issue with the historical foundation of the one-space rule, but I’ve found no good authority (including the local rules of the many states and federal courts to which I’m admitted) that dictate that two spaces between sentences must or should be used in documents filed with the court.

The important question, however, is whether using one space between sentences will raise the ire of the judge that notices it in a brief (you can convince the partners you work with or for by pointing out Butterick’s authorities). The judge, for example, may herself use two spaces between sentences, not understand why you are using only one space, and consider you ill-informed. At least in Minnesota, for example, the Minnesota Supreme Court and Court of Appeals use two spaces after periods. And I’ve never seen a Minnesota federal judge use only one space after a period.

I think a fear that you will receive a cool reception from a judge if you use only one space is unfounded. There is little chance that using one space between sentences will elicit a question at oral argument, and if it does then you can explain, citing Butterick and his authorities, why you chose to use one space instead of two. Instead of making you look like an uninformed fool, such a discussion may end up making you look more well versed in the niceties of legal writing. So follow Butterick, and use one space after punctuation marks, including periods.

Never underline. Butterick also advises never to underline text for emphasis or otherwise. Like two spaces after a period, underlining is a holdover from the typewriter era, where, as many have forgot (or in my case never knew) did not allow for bold or italics. On a typewriter, underlining was the only way to emphasize text. Now that we don’t use typewriters, there’s no need to underline. In my practice, I used to underline once and a while to emphasize particular words because the Bluebook requires case names to be italicized and I wanted to distinguish between the two. My view at that time was that underlining allowed to reader to distinguish easily between the italicized case names and text I wanted to emphasize. A few years ago, I stopped underlining for emphasis and started italicizing both case citations and the words that needed to be emphasized in the text. The world did not end. Given how ugly and blunt underlining can be, start using italics and bold to emphasize any text that deserves to stand out from the rest.

Don’t use monospaced fonts. Fonts such as Courier and Monaco are monospaced fonts, meaning that every character is the same width. Fonts such as Times New Roman are proportional fonts, meaning that the characters vary in width. Monospaced fonts are another holdover from the typewriter era. According to Butterick, monospaced fonts were invented so that they could meet the mechanical needs of typewriters, not “to win beauty contests.” (p.81). Butterick suggests that some courts may require monospaced fonts. But I don’t know of a single court that does so. You occasionally will see some opinions written in monospaced fonts. For example, Minnesota Senior District Court Judge David S. Doty still issues his opinions in Courier. But unless you’re a federal judge with life tenure, it would behoove you to stop using monospaced fonts for any legal writing.

Don’t use Arial font, and try an alternative to Times New Roman. While we are on the topic of fonts, Butterick also says not to use Arial, which he describes as among the most awful fonts “on the planet,” and whose use “is permanently associated with the work of people who will never care about typography.” (p.82-83). Instead of Arial, Butterick recommends Helvetica, Franklin Gothic, or Gill Sans. Butterick’s distaste for Arial seems to be equally matched by his dislike for Times New Roman, for which he dedicates two pages of his book entitled “A Brief History of Times New Roman.” (p.110-11). Butterick thinks that the popularity of Times New Roman is the result of its ubiquity, not necessarily its quality. It is “the font of least resistance,” and is not a font choice but rather is “the absent of a font choice, like the blackness of deep space is not a color.” (p. 110). If you like Times New Roman, Butterick recommends trying similar-looking professional fonts such as Plantin, Starling, or Bembo Book.

But here’s the rub: These professional fonts, and many other fonts recommended by Butterick, including his own font, Equity, must be purchased under the terms of a license. As Sam Glover has pointed out, it’s probably wise for ordinary people (including lawyers) to stick with system fonts because of the minefield of licensing issues that can arise from purchasing and using professional fonts. I would add an additional point: While it may be feasible for a solo practitioner or perhaps a small firm to purchase and use a professional font, the headaches from licensing and policing the use of these fonts at a mid-size to large firm probably outweigh any marginal benefits from their use.

Imagine having a conversation with a managing partner at a large firm where you explain that you no longer want to use Times New Roman, and that you want the firm to purchase a professional font such Plantin. For full disclosure, you also explain that not only will the new Plantin font cost the firm money and that it is only licensed for particular uses and users, it also may not display properly if the font is not correctly embedded before the user shares the document with others who have not purchased it. You may get a response like: “Interesting proposal. Why don’t you go back to work.” (Aside: Sam Glover and Matthew Butterick take this discussion to the next level in the comments to Glover’s article linked above. I recommend reading this discussion in its entirety, if only to confirm that it may be wise to avoid purchasing and using professional fonts).

Don’t use superscripted ordinals. After that pedantic discussion, let’s close with what should be obvious to any good legal writer: Never permit Microsoft Word to automatically change ordinals to superscript. I routinely find superscripted ordinals in case citations in briefs from opposing counsel, and occasionally I’ll find them in judicial opinions. I am convinced that 95% of these superscripted ordinals are the result of Microsoft Word’s default treatment of ordinals. That software automatically converts ordinals to superscript whether you want it to or not. As Butterick points out, Bluebook Rule 6.2(b)(i) (2010) prohibits the use of superscripted ordinals. So change your default settings in Word, and make sure that you do not use superscripted ordinals.


Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments::$tab_depth is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 455

Deprecated: Creation of dynamic property thesis_comments::$child_html is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 465
  • samglover April 6, 2012, 9:06 pm

    I’m not disagreeing with anything you said about fonts, but I do think using Arial or Times New Roman is legal writing malpractice.

    And, even if the Minnesota courts insist on using two spaces between sentences (so do many law reviews, for that matter), you won’t find a single non-legal book on your shelf with two spaces, and the 7th Circuit’s typography guide (no other circuit has released a typography guide that I’m aware of; they all just link to the 7th’s) explicitly says to use one space.

    Reply

Leave a Comment

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.


Deprecated: Automatic conversion of false to array is deprecated in /home3/wab3ds0abdue/public_html/wp-content/themes/thesis/lib/wp/boxes.php on line 172